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Real name: Sarah
Member Since: 22 Nov 2004
Bio: I hate bio boxes, I tend to panic. Well, what can I say. I own this site, I inherited it from Samantha, and worked my rear end off on it to make it my own, while retaining Sammy's charm.

I write, not particularly well, and seem to be best known for The Secret Diaries of The Lost Boys. I get asked to do the mortal's diaries, but never have because I can't seem to make them work.

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This story was written on Sept. 11th, 2001. The day two American planes were crashed into the WTC buildings in NYC, another was crashed into the Pentagon, and another went down in a field near Pittsburgh, PA.

The following is written from David's point of view. His inner thoughts are in italics. The basis of this story are lyrics from the Smashing Pumpkins songs "Tear", "Behold! The Night Mare", and "For Martha".

May we never forget, but may we overcome.
[Lost Boys] David, Dwayne, Laddie, Marko, Paul, Star
Genres: Drama
Pairing(s): None
Warnings: Other potentially disturbing content
Series: None
PG • Completed: Yes • 1 chapter(s) • Published: 02 Jan 2005 • Updated: 02 Jan 2005 • Word Count: 403 • Read Count: 1905 • Reviews: 4 • [Report This]

Reviewer: Sarah Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Jan 2005 Title: Chapter 1: 1

bat, I think Viper seemed to miss the point of your story. Just to remind you, even though I probably said so when I first read it, I got it. And I think you have the right to express yourself any way you want, and in this instance, your expression made sense. It was humans that brought on the tragedy that was 9/11, not monsters. Because humans can be monsters, it's entirely possible that monsters can act human at times. Again, a great piece.

(Protector Series #1) Be careful what you wish for, you just might get it.

Star learns the dangerous truth behind this old adage as she muses on what used to be. No matter how much you plan out in your head what might have been, no one knows what will really happen when time replays itself.
[The Protector Series] Anna Valentino, David, Dwayne, Marko, Michael Emerson, OCs: Multiple, Paul, Star
Genres: Action/Adventure, Drama, General, Supernatural
Pairing(s): None
Warnings: Adult Themes
Series: The Protector Series
R • Completed: Yes • 9 chapter(s) • Published: 14 Jan 2005 • Updated: 14 Jan 2005 • Word Count: 12198 • Read Count: 17414 • Reviews: 5 • [Report This]

Reviewer: Sarah Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Jan 2005 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter One

As always, I love this story, I love the series and, as always, I can't wait for Anna's past to catch up with her. That's the problem with knowing this story as well as I do. I know what's coming, and I want to rush along to that part, while going slowly enough to savour every word. I love you and this series, both have given me so much inspiration. xxx

(Sequel to 'The Shock of Miss Louise') Ruby's back, but nothing's the same.
[Lost Boys] David, Dwayne, Marko, OC: Female, Paul
Genres: Horror, Romance, Supernatural
Pairing(s): None
Warnings: Mild Violence, Other potentially disturbing content
Series: The Carousel Series
R • Completed: Yes • 11 chapter(s) • Published: 07 Mar 2005 • Updated: 24 Oct 2005 • Word Count: 20763 • Read Count: 14575 • Reviews: 6 • [Report This]

Reviewer: Sarah Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Oct 2005 Title: Chapter 6: 6

I want to be bitten by Paul. He's cute. *giggles* It really amused me to see mine and Carla's names in this chapter. Especially since we've talked about going to Santa Cruz together quite a few times... though I think Hawaii will be our next vacation. Thanks for the reference. It's been so long since I've read this series I started with Miss Louise and moved on. Big review coming at the end of the story, but I had to leave a comment on this chapter!

Author's Response: Paul will be over to your flat shortly. ;)

Reviewer: Sarah Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 24 Oct 2005 Title: Chapter 11: 11

This story ended up being very different to the draft you sent to Carla and myself. I’m a little surprised at the ending (am I right in thinking there will be another in the series?). For me, Ruby really loved Marko, but what she had for David had been created by the bond they shared. She loved Marko as a human, she actually fell in love with him, whereas with David, she simply used their bond to tap into his feelings... it feels to me like Ruby’s feelings for David came into existence because of their bond, rather being something that has been bubbling away for awhile. Of course, David’s feelings for Ruby have been bubbling away… I just don’t feel that Ruby will love him, not like she does with Marko anyway.

This is not a flame or a criticism, just my viewpoint on their relationship. I really hurt for Marko who loves Ruby. Not saying that David doesn’t either, but... let’s boil it down to l33t: Marko/Ruby OMG! OTP!!11!!! They’re meant to be together. So write another fic and fix it, damnit! *grins*

Enjoyed immensely. Anything that makes me review must really be eye-catching, because I’m shockingly lazy with reviews now. Don’t take my Ruby/Marko obsession too personally, remember, your fic brought me to the LB list, where I met my best friend. It’s got a lot to answer to, and I do feel like I’ve invested a lot in M/R’s relationship.

Thank you for posting. You know I love this story. Even if I’m lax at telling you so.

PS: you can reply to reviews on here. But you need to input your own html if you want to use paragraphs or formatting.

Author's Response: Ooo I didn't realize I could respond!

Yeah it took a detour; you're right here will be a third part... I just had to break it somewhere to start that third part. A lot of things I've sent you in the past will be worked in to the next part. I just have to get there. But it's nice because a lot of it is already written.

You're right: Marko and Ruby were true love. And they may still be! I'm all highly amused I created my first OTP! And I'm not gonna say whether Ruby really will fall for David or not yet... you'll have to see what happens. ;)

I'm just so amused at the OTP thing... like I've never created one before.

Thank you! It means much to me that you enjoy and appreciate it! And Louise did good! I'm glad to know that as well, it means a lot to me!

Basically the story you are about to read is a crossover between The Lost Boys and The Goonies now I am aware that a lot of you may not be familiar with The Goonies so I hope this helps
[Lost Boys] Other Fandom Character - Crossover
Genres: Crossover
Pairing(s): None
Warnings: None
Series: None
G • Completed: No • 1 chapter(s) • Published: 01 Jul 2005 • Updated: 02 Jul 2005 • Word Count: 811 • Read Count: 2363 • Reviews: 10 • [Report This]

Reviewer: Sarah Signed
Date: 09 Nov 2006 Title: Chapter 1: Help Guide

This fic is lacking chapters - I'm assuming that they got lost in the move. Please could you re-upload them, or I will delete this story for being simply a run-down of The Goonies.
Regards,
Sarah
(owner of The Lost Cave)

[Sequel to Manipulating Fate] Ruby adjusts into her life as a vampire, but will her heart choose Marko or David?
[Lost Boys] David, Dwayne, Marko, OC: Female, Paul
Genres: Drama, Horror, Romance, Supernatural
Pairing(s): None
Warnings: Heavy Violence, Other potentially disturbing content
Series: The Carousel Series
R • Completed: Yes • 20 chapter(s) • Published: 29 Oct 2005 • Updated: 18 May 2007 • Word Count: 19896 • Read Count: 72294 • Reviews: 100 • [Report This]

Reviewer: Sarah Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 30 Oct 2005 Title: Chapter 3: 3

I have no idea where you're going with this, but I'm eager for more. As I said before, the David/Ruby relationship bothers me - I feel that Ruby might be kidding herself over how she feels for David. She says she loves him, but she has a bond, which complicates matters. I wait for more of your fic to give me the answers I crave.

Set immediately after the movie; Michael has to supervise cleanup and face the decision of how to get rid of the bodies...rated PG-13 for general weirdness and dark humor and language ; Also David is featured but not exactly an interactive character. That's all I'm saying.
[Lost Boys] Alan Frog, David, Edgar Frog, Grandpa, Lucy Emerson, Michael Emerson, Sam Emerson, Star, Laddie
Genres: General
Pairing(s): None
Warnings: None
Series: None
PG-13 • Completed: Yes • 1 chapter(s) • Published: 05 Jan 2006 • Updated: 05 Jan 2006 • Word Count: 3067 • Read Count: 4650 • Reviews: 9 • [Report This]

Reviewer: Sarah Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 05 Jan 2006 Title: Chapter 1: 1/1

That was dark, disturbing and wholly amusing. Thank you so much for sharing the story with us, Zig. It's brilliant, and I have made it a featured story.

(Part 1 of 2) Ever wonder what really happened to David, Paul, Dwayne and Marko before the Emerson's made their fateful appearance in Santa Carla and why they ended up the way they did...or did they? Be prepared for the strange and unusual. *Side Note: It's a long one folks, so grab yourself a tub of popcorn and pull up that lazy-boy comfy chair because in truth, you're going to need it. My poor posture is the result of writing this thing.
[Lost Boys] David, Dwayne, Grandpa, Laddie, Marko, Max, OC: Female, Other, Paul, Star, Widow Jonhson
Genres: Action/Adventure, Drama, Horror, Humour, Romance, Supernatural
Pairing(s): None
Warnings: Character Death, Domestic Violence, Drug Use
Series: None
PG-13 • Completed: Yes • 24 chapter(s) • Published: 11 May 2006 • Updated: 25 Jun 2006 • Word Count: 115266 • Read Count: 50786 • Reviews: 11 • [Report This]

Reviewer: Sarah Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 13 Nov 2006 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5

Aside: It doesn’t matter what species you are, that’s got to hurt like hell!

*giggles* Good line. I was just going through the archive alphabetically (by author) and landed on your work and decided to give it a read - I'm very glad I did. I'm enjoying this immensely.

The thing about being a witch is, you're a woman still, and sometimes your heart will break.
[Lost Boys, Star] Maria, Star
Genres: Drama, Romance
Pairing(s): Maria/Star
Warnings: Femme Slash (female/female pairings)
Series: None
PG-13 • Completed: Yes • 1 chapter(s) • Published: 03 Mar 2008 • Updated: 03 Mar 2008 • Word Count: 1314 • Read Count: 2755 • Reviews: 1 • [Report This]

Reviewer: Sarah Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: 03 Mar 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Danger (Feeling Alive)

Oooh, love it. A good prologue to the movie, I like Maria and Star, they do make an interesting couple. Since you've written them several times, I've added that pairing to the archive. Love it.

Author's Response: Thanks! And it's about time! Every time I upload a story, I'm sad because there's no Star/Maria. I hoped you would get the message, meanie. (Let's just ignore the way I could have asked it for or possibly done it myself. Hee.)