Date: 29 Mar 2009 11:09 am Title: Chapter 1
Dam it! Here I was thinking they were going to have a last sort of hoo-ra, in bed so to speak. This just makes me really sad. I hate good byes. Good choice in songs though Dwayne, I love that one. Man, it's too short of a good bye, I need more closure than that! LOL. Fay is just...she's like part of Santa Carla. I can't see it ever leaving her, not really. It's like removing an old relic from an antique barn or something. It may find a new home, but it will never be the same.
Author's Response: *hugs* I know. Fay had me re-write the ending nine times. I swear she did. (And there was a big finale in bed but as much as Dwayne loved it Fay said no) As for closure, I have the feeling she'll be back some day. I'm glad you enjoyed it.