




Date: 12 Dec 2012 6:17 am Title: Chapter 17- Epilouge- Higher Learning
I loved your story!! It was one of the best that I've ever read!!
Date: 01 Dec 2010 11:21 am Title: Chapter 1- Welcome Home
I bow to you ! you are the best !!!! please write more!!!!!





Date: 17 Jan 2009 1:50 pm Title: Chapter 17- Epilouge- Higher Learning
ROFL! I eat my teacher. That's great.
I just want to say that this was an excellent story. I think you wrote me very well for having never met me. It was funny and exciting and suspenseful all the way through. So I'm giving it a rating of ten. Again.





Date: 16 Jan 2009 10:32 pm Title: Chapter 17- Epilouge- Higher Learning
This was an amazing and wonderful story and I am sad that it's over.
I wish someone would eat a co-worker of mine. My life would be so much easier.
Author's Response: Hahah! Yeah, I know the feeling. I've had a few bosses that I wouldn't mind letting the boys have at! I'm a firm believer in Karma..The one that was being a real bitch to me last year wound up having an aneurysm and was in the hospital at year's end. This co-worker of yours better look out!
Date: 16 Jan 2009 8:22 am Title: Chapter 16- Don't Let The Sun Go Down On Me
Neat! That turned out well. Maybe not for Sam, but nobody got killed. (yet). But I can't believe it's almost over! Waaaah...
Date: 14 Jan 2009 8:56 am Title: Chapter 15- Over and Out
Uh oh! I'm thinking werewolf? Wait, I forgot--
*SCREAMS* New chapter!!
I can't wait to find out how this plays out. The suspense!!





Date: 14 Jan 2009 8:04 am Title: Chapter 15- Over and Out
I love your originality, detail, plotline, and writing technique. Hope you update soon, when you do I will rate again!
Date: 13 Jan 2009 10:31 pm Title: Chapter 15- Over and Out
Edgar in a beetle! That's hilarious. And the walkie talkies, haha 'over and out.' Did they find Thorn?
Date: 13 Jan 2009 10:13 pm Title: Chapter 14- In Contemplation of Sacrifice
Great job on Sam! I could hear him talking in my head. I think that they should just stay away from the cave....ya, just stay away. Poor Pyro, what a dilema.
Date: 13 Jan 2009 6:55 pm Title: Chapter 15- Over and Out
You know you are an amazing writer, right? I mean seriously everything that I have read of yours has pretty much captivated me.
Author's Response: Thank you very much for such kind words! I'm really looking forward to more of your story!
Date: 13 Jan 2009 6:39 pm Title: Chapter 15- Over and Out
Lmao Drafty crack! Think the boys actually care if their cracks are drafty?
Author's Response: TeeHeeHee..bet they like drafty cracks!





Date: 09 Jan 2009 7:40 pm Title: Chapter 14- In Contemplation of Sacrifice
I can not beleive I'm still liking this! This is an complete first for me. Amazing story, awesome character, and I NEVER know what's gonna happen, AWESOME JOB! 10 GOLD STARS!! LOL
Date: 08 Jan 2009 5:58 pm Title: Chapter 14- In Contemplation of Sacrifice
Ooh man! Now I'm all squirmy with suspense! I can't wait to see what will happen next. This is such a great story. :D
Author's Response: I'm so glad you're liking it! Quick question...how do we link this story to yours so that it's part of your challenge series? Since you authored the challenge, I think you have to do it in your prefs...





Date: 07 Jan 2009 4:13 pm Title: Chapter 1- Welcome Home
Wait a minute... if Paul is as much of a pervert as we think he is ....and theirs only one bathroom....and he haunts the bathroom....THEN HE'S SEEN LUCY NAKED!!!!GROSS DUDE!
Date: 07 Jan 2009 9:31 am Title: Chapter 13- Peices of Paul
Sorry to hear about the story. Great chapter though. I love the little tidbit about Marko's pigeons. Poor Paul, I'd hate to think of him as hard of hearing. Although, I doubt it will hurt him much.