Date: 14 Apr 2009 6:05 am Title: Chapter 1
Realy great story! I'll definently check out more of yours! Peace & hugs!
Date: 30 Oct 2008 10:35 pm Title: Chapter 1
This is hilarious. I like it better than my Halloween tale for the boys. I'm still trying to picture Marko as Elvis, eeh gads. And then David winning the grand prize of all things, that's too funny.
My only suggestion would be to space everything out. It gets kinda hard to read when it's all bunched together.
Author's Response: Thanks! I'll remember that next time.