Date: 19 Apr 2009 3:33 pm Title: I've got a secret that I cannot say...
Excellent Grandpa here in particular. I love that this story did a better job of tying the original to the "sequel" than the sequel did. Nicely done.





Date: 29 Jun 2008 10:28 pm Title: I've got a secret that I cannot say...
excellent tone, concise and sturdy, love the interaction between David and Grandpa, as well as the elusive nature of the ending. great read!
Date: 25 Jun 2008 10:50 pm Title: I've got a secret that I cannot say...
Once again you've hit the nail on the freaking head. *sighs* You write in a style that I never tire of re-reading. Oh, and three cheers for the Cockroach.
Date: 25 Jun 2008 12:13 pm Title: I've got a secret that I cannot say...
Very interesting. I'm definately intrigued with this so I can't wait for the next update. Inquiring minds want to know!