Date: 21 Jul 2008 9:56 pm Title: Chapter 5 - Feeling Charitable
I gotta say, Marko can dominate me in those chaps any day! That was awesome! And OMG, like...*twidles hair* does Michael ever shut up? I hope your Davey gets the goods on the girlie before Max does anything.
Date: 20 Jul 2008 1:09 am Title: Chapter 5 - Feeling Charitable
That was a good chapter. I enjoyed reading it.
Hm... who is the girl and were does she come from? *puts fingers to chin*
Is she a threat to the boys?
(no I can't keep away from David and fanfics with the lost boys. I have given up trying. No need to tell about my writing, it is as before)
Sorry for the OT
Keep writing on this one!
I want David to talk to the girl ASP -->
Author's Response: *puts finger up nose* beheheheh ;)
[Report This]Date: 19 Jul 2008 9:28 pm Title: Chapter 5 - Feeling Charitable
Marko, man, I gotta ask you, what is up with those chaps? You have some secret life you wanna tell us about? Are you a dominatrix cowboy?”
And
Because white shows off my package better!” Paul answered matter-of-factly, as he rocked his hips.
What a picture! Hahah! So Paulie!
Author's Response: Gotta love the Paulie!
Date: 02 Apr 2008 5:59 pm Title: Chapter 4 - Frog Interception
I'm curious now about Charity's background. She sounds like a human turned vamp, turned human again. How avant-garde.
Date: 02 Apr 2008 5:44 pm Title: Chapter 2 - Fun and Games
*Sigh* Marko's eyes trailing over a brunette. He he. I'll just pretend that was me.
Man, I've so been waiting for your story. I didn't even know it was up. Marko may be my favorite, but I love what you're doing with David in this chapter. It's so seductive.
Date: 02 Apr 2008 10:31 am Title: Chapter 4 - Frog Interception
I can see now that it is not just about Max. He is just the head vampire. (or am I wrong here?)
Me sorry...
I like that you get deep into Davids mind. You're doing a great job there!
It is intresting to see into his deepest thoughts. :)
Now I recognize this story too...
Nice of you to put it back up again :)
/Em
Date: 02 Apr 2008 1:36 am Title: Chapter 4 - Frog Interception
Good story!! :D
Looking forward to more!
A story about Max... a bit suprised you write about him, but I like this one :)
Hoping for some David *cough* *cough*... soon...
:)
Keep it comin
*give you thumbs up*
*runs of to write a little on my own story*
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. Why are you surprised I am including Max? He is a part of the Boy's life, after all.
[Report This]Date: 01 Apr 2008 10:54 pm Title: Chapter 4 - Frog Interception
Bleached Teeth! Wonder if poor, pathetic Mikey will get his heart broken?
Author's Response: Mikey wants to know!!!
[Report This]Date: 01 Apr 2008 10:48 pm Title: Chapter 3 - Florence Nightingale
Teach me some crafty goodness! Bwahaha!
Oooh, Max is a...Maxi-Pad. Remind me not to piss him off!
Author's Response: He is a bad Maxi Pad!! Bad!
[Report This]Date: 01 Apr 2008 10:43 pm Title: Chapter 2 - Fun and Games
Love David's internal thought process..and that he likes to toy with his dinner. His assessment of Charity was hysterical!
Author's Response: Thanks for that review. Thats one thing I hope to do with this story is try to get inside Davids head a little and show some character reflection.
[Report This]Date: 01 Apr 2008 10:37 pm Title: Chapter 1 - Welcome Home to Santa Carla
Where's the cream filling! Bwahah..What a ditz!
Great description of Maria..and I love that line:
"What's the magic word? Asshole!" Bwahah! So Boy-Ish!
Author's Response: You know I have to write Star a little, *ahem* special hahhaha