Date: 22 Dec 2008 2:58 pm Title: Chapter 1
Don't think I'm a bitch, but...if you really wanta be a writer, read more (lots more) and watch less porn, honey. You're about a third of the way there.
Author's Response: I respect all opinions and views. But all content I write is appriately labelled. If you don't like porn, why did you read this selection? Plenty of my stories do not feature any porn. You may find those ones more to your liking.





Date: 04 Mar 2008 6:32 am Title: Chapter 1
Great job. I really liked this one.
Date: 03 Mar 2008 9:12 pm Title: Chapter 1
Great stuff, Python!





Date: 03 Mar 2008 12:20 pm Title: Chapter 1
This is Phytons work, her writing, and its great. Cheers!





Date: 03 Mar 2008 12:01 pm Title: Chapter 1
Nimble grody toes! Hahahh! Naw... this is H O T. So sexy. I love it. And Sad.... I think I teared up. And the dinner, and the ring toss... such excellent details.