Date: 24 Jul 2012 9:17 pm Title: I Used To Be So In Control
NOOOOOOO NEED MORE!!!!! PLZ! AND NEED MORE MARKO!!!!!!!
Date: 14 Jan 2009 6:12 am Title: I Used To Be So In Control
Pretty good! Update soon I want to see what happens next!
Date: 23 Jan 2008 10:16 am Title: You And Me... An Accident Waiting To Happen
I loved this chapter. I wonder how she's going to react to finding out exactly what she is now. Please update as soon as possible.
Date: 23 Jan 2008 8:00 am Title: You And Me... An Accident Waiting To Happen
I like your story so far! You capture the boys really well. The only suggestion I have is to make sure you put dialouge on seperate lines, and not in the same sentence, if two different people are talking. Also, may want to run a fine tooth comb through it, there are a few typos.
But other than that, I can't wait to read more, and find out exactly what David has planed for Victoria.
Date: 22 Jan 2008 5:46 pm Title: Beautiful Girls
I really love this story so far. I wish the chapters were a bit longer though.
Date: 21 Jan 2008 11:37 pm Title: Moonlight Mile
She needs to be careful or she'll end up dead. I loved thgis chapter, please update as soon as possible.