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Reviews For Santa Carla... Where The Vampires Roam
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Reviewer: FlowerChild Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Aug 2014 7:36 pm Title: I Used To Be So In Control

Wow more Please

Reviewer: lostone Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2012 9:17 pm Title: I Used To Be So In Control

NOOOOOOO NEED MORE!!!!! PLZ! AND NEED MORE MARKO!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Jessica Anonymous starstarstarhalf star [Report This]
Date: 14 Jan 2009 6:12 am Title: I Used To Be So In Control

Pretty good! Update soon I want to see what happens next!

Reviewer: Jessica Anonymous starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Jan 2008 10:16 am Title: You And Me... An Accident Waiting To Happen

I loved this chapter. I wonder how she's going to react to finding out exactly what she is now. Please update as soon as possible.

Reviewer: AquaAnimus Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jan 2008 8:00 am Title: You And Me... An Accident Waiting To Happen

I like your story so far! You capture the boys really well. The only suggestion I have is to make sure you put dialouge on seperate lines, and not in the same sentence, if two different people are talking. Also, may want to run a fine tooth comb through it, there are a few typos.

But other than that, I can't wait to read more, and find out exactly what David has planed for Victoria.

Reviewer: Anonymous Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 22 Jan 2008 5:46 pm Title: Beautiful Girls

I really love this story so far. I wish the chapters were a bit longer though.

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Date: 21 Jan 2008 11:37 pm Title: Moonlight Mile

She needs to be careful or she'll end up dead. I loved thgis chapter, please update as soon as possible.

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