Date: 10 Feb 2010 7:31 am Title: Bite to Break Skin (The Girl is a Vampire)
Ah. I read this ages ago, and was struck about how good it was.Now I've found it again; my afternoon must have been made!
Its human, desperate, and beautifully told. The quasi-awkward budding of thier romance is natural, bittersweet, and underscored with a horrid, sharp poignance that really does bring flavour to the piece.
The Max cameo was great. I was snickering though that.
Well observed. well constructed, and steeped in a quiet, steely despair, this is a great fic and character piece.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I was really hoping the despair came through, so I'm particularly glad to hear that it did.