Date: 18 Mar 2007 8:08 pm Title: Chapter 3- Beauty of The Boardwalk
*hands Vi a piece of extra-dark chocolate cake; points to it*
You see that? That's for writing such a good chapter. *nods* Every time you write an excellent chapter, I'll share one of my goodies with you. Though, I hope you're not on a digi-diet, otherwise it'll be blown to heck every time you update *grins*
Date: 18 Mar 2007 2:21 pm Title: Chapter 3- Beauty of The Boardwalk
That was an awesome chapter. I really liked that. :) David is the greatest in this fic.
Author's Response: Thank you. I'm glad you like David here. He's the character I'm most nervous about capturing.
Date: 18 Mar 2007 3:14 am Title: Chapter 3- Beauty of The Boardwalk
*hugs Vi* I love you! I want more. *stomps foot* Now!
LoL Good chappy, I'm really, really impressed here Vi. The difference between this and your first story is beyond words..... not that I didn't like that, I enjoyed it and you know it, but your writing is better. Seriously, I'm proud of ya! Great descriptions without over doing it and stuff. Although I'd like to see more Cathy (hinthint) this is still a good update. *grin*
Author's Response: Aw, thank you so much! You've put the biggest smile on my face here. I beleive the next chapter follows Cathy. I don't know yet since I haven't written it, but I will soon!
Date: 15 Mar 2007 1:57 am Title: Chapter 2- Cathy The Uncool Vampire
Okay, ahem, *takes a breath to calm herself* I did not just let out a fangirlish squeal over a female OC......*sighs* I just love the idea of her. I guess because it mirrors one of my first original stories from when I younger, of course mine was never this good.... and all you've done is introduce her so far lol
*shakes head and chuckles* Good job Vi! I'm lovin' it! *snickers and wonders if anyone will catch the pun there*
Date: 15 Mar 2007 1:04 am Title: Chapter 1- Gang Leader's Girl
Good work Vi, I can tell a huge difference between your writing in this and the beginning of your first story. Dunno how to describe it, but so far it's less jumpy and has better grammar and whatnot.... it's obvious you've grown in writing skill in my opinion. And you haven't even written much yet! So I'm sure this is a good sign lol
Good start, can't wait for more :o)