Date: 11 Nov 2014 6:48 pm Title: Acceptance
Amazing how you wrote this! Makes me want to read it over and over never stopping.
Date: 21 Oct 2010 4:59 pm Title: Acceptance
It's so hard to find really good Lost Boys fanfiction. But, I did!
I really like it, especially the way you made Paul so innocent (and David so nice. He's a sweetheart really, and we fangirls know it! We know ALL!)
I like how it was focused through the use of only three characters.
My favourite part definitely has to be when David takes Paul back to the cave and then refuses him. It was so simple, but so sweet.
I think, the only thing needed to improvve it is to make the sex scene a llittle...I don't know, less graphic? Concentrate on how sweet it is rather than literal description. But mostly that was done.
Long review is long. But I hope it helped!
Date: 06 Mar 2009 2:11 pm Title: Acceptance
omg loooove this.
i'd really love for there to be more ^^
Date: 20 Sep 2006 3:00 am Title: Acceptance
I'm a major fan of ths movie and I fell hard for your stories. I loved Davd and hated he died in the movie. Reading your stories about his love for his "brother" and how they came to be have been terrific. David breaks my heart in the movie and in the stories I've been lucky to find.