Date: 09 Jul 2012 5:15 pm Title: TLC
good story love david
Date: 20 May 2011 12:39 pm Title: One sick puppy
would you consider creating something like this for paul/dwayne cause they're my fave pair lol XD
Date: 10 Jul 2009 1:44 am Title: TLC
Date: 02 Feb 2006 2:37 am Title: TLC
david said do you want me to stop no harder harder oh yeah fuck me.
Date: 17 May 2005 3:46 pm Title: One sick puppy
Very....interesting. I may not like slash, but that isn't what this review is about. I think that you rushed things a bit. A lot of people tend to do that. While you don't want to go too slow, speed is a poblem. People tend to want to get their thoughts down and make the plot run too fast. But other wise a very good piece of creative writing. :)
Author's Response: Thank you I guess you could say creative is the word for it.....Why did you read the story if you don't like slash.Oh well it doesn't matter,I just hoped you liked it.I'll try not to rush things to much in my next story.Thanks for the advice.