




Date: 20 Aug 2008 2:20 pm Title: The Face In the Rose: An Interlude
Another good story, Very well writen. Its poetic.





Date: 20 Aug 2008 2:15 pm Title: Face Down
Wow... So, I am thinking that the William/Max made her into a vampire? Then she kills MIchael? Neat! I love how you wrote it abstractly....





Date: 20 Aug 2008 2:10 pm Title: Every Thorn Has Its Rose
This was really interesting! Max being a vamp who can shift into bodies!





Date: 18 Jan 2007 3:29 am Title: The Face In the Rose: An Interlude
It is so beautifully written! Very rarely is surrelism used in writing, but it works perfectly here. This is the only story I have read by you, so I don't know who William is, but I love the simple story that was told here. Parts 4 and 5 are my very favorites.





Date: 25 May 2006 11:38 pm Title: Every Thorn Has Its Rose
no marko?