Well, you've all read my story "The Abandoned Soul" Right? Well I'm thinking, should I right the antics of the Emersons unpacking and further develope Ciara and Micheals relationship or should I skip to the concert scene while Ciara and Lucy look for a job? What should I do? I have two different ideas in my head, one that's new and unused and one that everbodies read over and over again.

And who was the kind and generous person to rate my story four stars?

I'd further develop micheals and ciera(sp)'s characters.

I agree. I have had more than one story fall flat because I didn't characterize enough. And extra characterization never hurt anybody--if you decide later that it's too much you can always cut it back a little, it'll still have been a good exercise for you.